Nancy Drew tried to open her
eyes. Her lashes refused to cooperate, and her head was pounding. With her
fingers she found a tender spot just behind her left ear, wincing as she probed
it, and slowly, tortuously, her eyes opened.
The walls were covered in
coruscating rainbows.
She immediately glanced down at
her fanned fingers, but her engagement ring was still there, although there was
no way it was responsible for the patterns shimmering on the walls. She sat up,
clutching the musty blankets to her chest, and directly through the window she
could see a waterfall, utterly gorgeous, pouring down over the rocks and
splashing into the air. It was just another breathtaking sight on a vacation
that had been full of them.
The trailer she was in, though,
was anything but. Nancy was still in the white gown she had worn for the
rehearsal the night before, but the hem was torn and dirty, and the right strap
had come loose. The blankets smelled like they had been shut up in a closet for
years, and, making a face, Nancy kicked them down and slid out of the bed. The
sheets were washed to threadbare patches over a slender, sagging mattress.
The last time she'd slept on
something like that had been summer camp, and it hadn't been easy. The back of
her throat tasted like bitter cotton. She was sure she'd been drugged.
The other windows in the room
had been halfheartedly tacked over with elderly burlap, and while the waterfall
made for a great view, it didn't tell her much. She'd spent time in Hawaii, but
not memorizing the landmarks. She hadn't meant to for this trip, either.
Today was supposed to be her
wedding day.
Nancy sighed and checked her
watch, glancing around for her shoes on the carpet, which had probably been
mustard-colored early in its existence, but now felt gritty and almost damp
under her bare feet. No shoes. No purse. No cell phone. By now she would have
been almost bored if she'd actually found any of the three. Not that this was
much of a challenge, either.
The cardboard-thin door was
shut, but not locked; Nancy wandered out into a hallway that had been carpeted
in some nauseating pattern of alternating burgundy and oatmeal at some point.
The stove was coated in the grime of a hundred meals and the refrigerator
looked like a PSA for supervising children's hide-and-seek games; it was a
huge, hulking monolith a good ten years older than she was, avocado green, the
vertical latch-handle pitted with rust.
It would have been a nightmare.
But the rainbows still came through, from rips in the brittle canvas, blinking
on the grease-discolored walls. Her husband-to-be was somewhere waiting for
her.
Ned. The last thing she could remember was his face, his
expression clouded with anger, her hand wrenched from his grip as vise-like
arms closed around her.
Most of the reason they'd come
to Hawaii was to escape this. The threats had begun a week before; notes shoved
under the door, hushed menacing warnings left on the answering machine at her
father's house. Nine months of planning had all been undone for a leisurely
ceremony in a picturesque church in view of the ocean. And Bess had gushed
about how romantic it all was.
How romantic. How romantic to
be shut in a musty ancient trailer on the morning of her wedding day.
Nancy studied the main
entrance, then the back, debating over which was more likely to be watched or
booby-trapped. The back entrance faced the waterfall, and she was unsure how
steady the ground would be on that side; she pried off a good strip of the
canvas, working underneath the tape with her fingernails, and saw rocky ground,
a sheer drop, and a pool far below, with no indication of how shallow it might
be. Remembering the slippery rocks around another waterfall, Nancy shrugged and
turned her attention to the front door. She doubted that Ned would be the one
waking her if she made a false step and tumbled into the pounding path of the
waterfall.
The lock on the front door was
the only new feature she'd found. The door might be two flimsy pieces of
aluminum with a pane of safety glass between, and the frame itself might be as
sturdy as a reed, but that deadbolt was going to hold up. Nancy would have
risked a well-placed kick, but her bare toes curled at the thought of missing
her aim.
Five minutes later, Nancy was
unscrewing the bolt housing with the thin edge of a butter knife when a key
slid into the lock. Immediately she dropped the knife onto the counter and
backed up until her legs were against the deteriorating couch, her wary gaze on
the door.
"So," Nick Alves
said, glaring at her as he shouldered the door open. "You're awake."
Nancy glanced at her watch, a
useless gesture, and immediately asked, "What time is it?"
He nodded at the wide face and
glistening band at her wrist. "Your watch stop?"
"It's still set on my
timezone."
Alves stepped closer, his
female conspirator lingering by the door, keeping her distrustful gaze on
Nancy. "Like it matters. You just need to stay quiet for a few more
hours."
Calm. She was calm. She
shouldn't have been. Nancy made her lower lip start to tremble, and a thin,
gleaming rim of tears slowly grew above her lower lashes. "Like you're
going to let me go back," she choked out, clenching her fist. "I'll
never see Ned again."
"Can it, blondie."
Alves cut his accomplice off
with a sharp look and turned his attention back to Nancy. "We're just
gonna let you talk to your dad for a second, and then this can all be
over."
Nancy let her eyes widen as she
saw Nick take a rather elderly cell phone out of his pocket, and the woman by
the door took a threatening step in her direction. Nancy made herself slump,
watching as Nick placed a call, made a few lame threats, and handed the phone
to her, drawing a wicked knife out of his pocket, his intention clear. If she
screwed up, he'd hurt her.
The only reason I'm not
kicking it out of your hand is that I don't want to be all bruised up on my
wedding day, Nancy thought angrily in his
direction as she took the phone, fighting back the urge to wipe her fingers on
her dress after they touched his.
"Nancy?" Her father's
voice was preternaturally calm, too.
"Yeah, Dad, it's me,"
Nancy said, making her voice shake.
"Can you stall for another
couple minutes?"
"I'll try, but the place
they have me is‹"
"That's enough," Nick
snarled, jerking the phone out of her hand. Nancy collapsed to the couch in
mock defeat, lifting her bare feet off the carpet. She'd probably have to scrub
the soles of her feet for a good ten minutes to get all the grime off.
Whatever else Nick had done, at
least he'd given her a good story for the grandkids.
"I think we need to dose
her again," the woman said, rooting around in a battered handbag.
"No, no, please
don't," Nancy begged tearfully, startling Nick when she threw herself at
his feet. "I promise I'll be good. I will. Just promise me you'll let me
go. I have to see Ned again. I love him so much. Please tell me you didn't do
anything to him."
"Just shut up!" Nick
said, trying to kick out and dislodge her, but the sight of Nancy on her knees,
gazing up at him, was obviously doing something to Nick, and making the woman
just as jealous as he was interested. She had to be careful. Nancy backed off
but stayed on her knees, her hands clasped.
"You didn't hurt him, did
you?"
"Just tell her what she
wants to hear."
Under that thin veneer of fear
and terror, through the layers and protection of her faith and self-confidence,
Nancy felt the first trickle of true, real doubt slide like acid down her
heart. Surely they hadn't done anything to Ned. They'd find her standing over
two bleeding, broken bodies if they had.
"He's fine. You promised
you'd be good. So you just stay here, get on the couch, and don't try anything.
Like telling your father where you are. You're too smart for your own
good." Nick glared at her.
Nancy slowly climbed back onto
the couch, trying not to think about her knees. Bleach. She'd just scrub
herself with bleach. That would be sure to set the mood. "If you guys are
so desperate to get ransom for me, how'd you come up with the money to get to
Hawaii?" she asked in genuine curiosity.
"You kidding? With all the
dough we can get out of your old man, a couple plane tickets to Hawaii were
nothing."
"Plus, when it's a stolen
credit card anyway..."
You bought your tickets to
Hawaii with a stolen credit card. Wow. This is pitiful. Nancy nodded encouragingly, keeping her expression
troubled.
The woman took another few
steps closer. The light had caught the ring on Nancy's finger, and she was
drawn to it, to the chips of refracted light thrown on the walls between the
waterfall's reflections. "How 'bout you give me that," she said,
gesturing at the ring. "And that watch."
The ring was expensive, and a
family heirloom, and it was never coming off her finger. The watch looked
expensive too, but not anywhere near as expensive as it had been, she was sure.
"Yeah, about that,"
Nancy said, and her voice was hard, and her eyes were clear. "No."
The woman glanced at Nick, who
shrugged, his eyes alight with mild interest. As far as he was concerned, he
might see a catfight in a minute, and he had no problem with that.
"You want to have a nice
scar down your cheek when you walk down the aisle?" the woman threatened,
pulling out her own knife, which looked like a dime-store knockoff of a Swiss
army knife.
Nancy stood up, neatly
balancing on the balls of her feet, settling into a defensive stance. "Do
you really think my dad hasn't already traced the call you were stupid enough
to make?"
"You can't trace a
five-second call," Nick scoffed. But she could hear that very faint doubt
in his voice.
"You can now. We were
tracking you from the second you got off the plane. We've just been letting you
dig your own graves, since then. You're going away for a long time, Nick."
The woman and Nick exchanged
glances. "Get rid of that cell phone!" she screamed, and Nick
wrenched open the back door, pitching it into the falls. He turned back,
panting.
Just in time to see a police
officer in full SWAT gear dart through the open door, an impressively large gun
in his hand, followed by three teammates, Carson, and Ned.
"Nancy!" Ned said it,
but immediately she was wrapped in the arms of both her fiance and her father,
like some breathing human shield. She closed her eyes and stood up on her
tiptoes, and the male scent of Ned's aftershave and the comforting familiarity
of her father's cheek made her sigh in relief. It was going to be all right.
"What took you so long?"
Carson demanded.
Nancy looked between them, to
where Alves and his girlfriend were being led down the steps in handcuffs.
"They drugged me," she said. "Honestly, I'd been awake for two
seconds when I hit the button."
Carson picked up Nancy's hand,
peering at the silver watch he'd given her the previous Christmas. The GPS
signal it emitted was strong enough to be tracked all over the island, and
she'd long before stopped noticing its weight on her wrist.
"Best money I ever
spent."
Nancy smiled in response, then
turned her face back to Ned, his warm brown eyes lit with concern as he gazed
down at her.
"Please tell me you think
we can get through the rest of this holiday without anything else
happening."
Nancy leaned up and kissed Ned
on the cheek, then breathed into his ear, "You sure you want me to make
that kind of promise?"
Ned chuckled, looping one arm
around her waist and drawing her up close to him, before letting her go.
"We have four hours, babe."
"I'm glad they were so accommodating
to our schedule," Nancy drawled, leading the two men in her life to the
door. Bess and George waved excitedly.
If only they were all this
easy.
Bess clucked over Nancy's dress
as soon as she was within earshot. "That thing was so pretty. Oh my God,
did they keep you in some kind of serial killer hideout?"
"More like an
elderly-white-trash-relative trailer," Nancy sighed, rubbing a bruised
elbow. "You know what's funny? I doubt I would have gotten a full night of
sleep last night, otherwise."
"Way to be optimistic,
Nan," George said, laughing.
Nancy glanced back in time to
see Carson catch Ned's arm, make some comment to him, and pass a small piece of
paper over. Bess started experimentally arranging Nancy's hair, then gasped in
horror when she saw Nancy's bare feet, her careful French pedicure ruined.
"So what was that?"
Nancy asked, sliding her arm through Ned's as he walked by, gently shrugging
off Bess's histrionic ministrations.
Ned chuckled. "Your
dowry," he said, patting his pocket.
"The deed to four chickens
and a milk cow?"
"The transmitter code to
your GPS watch." Ned grinned broadly. "He said it was about
time."
"Worried I'm gonna wander
off, Nickerson?"
Ned glanced down at her bare
feet and a second later had her swept into his arms, before she could even
squeak in protest. "Not so much worried as convinced," Ned told her
with a mock-long-suffering sigh. "Most girls, when they get cold feet,
don't get them quite as cold as you do."
"These are not cold feet," she told him indignantly, but
settled against his chest anyway. "Besides, I'll never be out of your
sight. Not after today."
"You're such a gorgeous liar," Ned smiled, leaning down to give her a kiss.